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“She also found herself grieving the death of a quarter horse, whose movements were remarkably natural.”

…as opposed to all those quarter horses with unnatural gaits?  Isn’t the action of a quarter horse one of the main features of the animal?  And the less a reader knew about horses, the stranger the sentence would get…

[sigh]  See the original article here

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